I submit for your approval...

Name: Claudia Delastra

Sex: F

Age: 14

Weight: 200 lbs including cybernetic components

Race: Seraph cyborg

Hair: Platinum blonde

Eyes: Aquamarine

Skin: Pale, green tint

Native World: Advent

Affiliation: Crescent Tribe Royal Family

Alignment: Chaotic Neutral

Preferred Weapon: Who needs a weapon when half of your body is made from solid steel?

Bio in brief: Born to the Alpha of the Crescent Tribe, Claudia was once a bright and sweet little girl with an innate aptitude for weaponry. Encouraged by her father, she studied swordplay from a very young age. However, when the tribe was attacked by a disorganized anarchist element in its last, desperate bid for power, she was seriously injured in the aftermath by an undiscovered landmine. Emergency cybernetic surgery saved her life, but subjected her to a lifetime of pain and misery. At first, she tackled her recovery with verve and optimism. Virtually overnight, however, she became angry, reclusive, and bitter. Upon learning the Phoenix Clan, rivals of the Crescent people, had supplied the terrorist band with its powerful weapons, she swore uncompromising vengeance.

That looks pretty good. AND its a sci-fi RP. I might join this if you registar at the other forum!